Her well meant intentions
Or so she thought.
A Promise
that she couldn’t keep
Though she tried
to be pleasing
to be agreeable
It takes more than empty promises
The taste of failure
is bitter
Resentment comes from within
Not their disappointment
but her own shame
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The writer in me 
This is a lovely poetic exploration of the genesis of complex human feelings. Perceptive and sensitive. 🙂
Nice reflection of human failure and trying to succeed.Thank you for liking my post.”400th.post.”best regards.jalal
A real Gladius with great depth as to human nature. Thanks, Parmis!